12 Replies to “Shwas hota Shwasat tewha”

  1. ek line sevatchi majhya kadun

    aayushy bhar je jalat hote mala bhagun

    tech aaj ale hote malaa jalwayla……….

    aata kavita harkat nahi kharyat utraylaa

    1. khup chan lihatos. i m impressed. I thing our lines, our combinations matched well. I think u have been Hurt by ur Love one. If not i hope it may not happen with anyone like you. ur last joined lines r best. They complete the poems with some or other Moral . Good. Carry On.

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